Mousestar stood on the highest boulder. that circled the battle field. "We are gathered here today for Coalpaw's apprentice trial," he dipped his head to his clanmates. "As you all know, Coalpaw's warrior ceremony was delayed a couple moons due to his injury by the cliffs. We pray that StarClan gives him the strength to pass his trial so he may be allowed to earn his warrior name."
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Coalpaw wheezed as the prisoner apprentice scrambled to stand over him. The black she-cat pinned his chest with her paws, driving her claws into his fur. Coalpaw let out a yowl. She craned her body to hiss into his ear. "It's over. You lost."
There was a murmur that rippled through the crowd that surrounded them.
"Is he going to pass?" A tom asked nervously.
The charcoal tom let out a growl and twisted his body so his paws were beneath her belly. He drove his claws into her soft skin and pushed with his legs, forcing her upward. Her paws left his chest to dangle in the air. Sharp talons swiped down at him, but couldn't reach. Coalpaw's face twisted and his teeth bared into a snarl. The tom heaved her body with all of his force. Desperately he scrambled over the snow to climb to his paws. Blood painted the white and glistened in the sun's warmth.
(if anyone would like to take over the captive apprentice, you are welcome to.)
Yeah sorry! We can continue if you're still up for it